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Monday, 18 November 2013

Dialog

Create dialog following these aspects.

Miss c talking about behavior 

How do you think your behavior has been kodi?" asked Miss C

"Well I think that I am doing average." Replied Kodi

"Could you be a bit more specific?"

"I Think that I am always socializing and not doing the amount of work needed."

"Ok continue."

"And I sometimes talk when you're talking."

"Ok we can work on those." replied Miss C

Mrs Mill talking about year 8 assembly.

"Kodi, would you like to come up on stage to accept this award of being the best story writer in the year 8 assembly?"

"Um? I do get a little stage fright but ill do it."Kodi said confidently.

"You dont have to do it if you dont want to. I can get someone else to accept it for you."

"No thanks I'm happy to accepted it. but thanks for the offer."

"No problem," Miss Mill said happily a she walked away."




1 comment:

  1. In the part of the dialog when Miss C asked about your behavior, you missed out a speech mark.
    In the second part when you replied to Mrs Mills, you put a fullstop and not a comma.

    from COLE

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