Create dialog following these aspects.
Miss c talking about behavior
How do you think your behavior has been kodi?" asked Miss C
"Well I think that I am doing average." Replied Kodi
"Could you be a bit more specific?"
"I Think that I am always socializing and not doing the amount of work needed."
"Ok continue."
"And I sometimes talk when you're talking."
"Ok we can work on those." replied Miss C
Mrs Mill talking about year 8 assembly.
"Kodi, would you like to come up on stage to accept this award of being the best story writer in the year 8 assembly?"
"Um? I do get a little stage fright but ill do it."Kodi said confidently.
"You dont have to do it if you dont want to. I can get someone else to accept it for you."
"No thanks I'm happy to accepted it. but thanks for the offer."
"No problem," Miss Mill said happily a she walked away."
In the part of the dialog when Miss C asked about your behavior, you missed out a speech mark.
ReplyDeleteIn the second part when you replied to Mrs Mills, you put a fullstop and not a comma.
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